Friday, June 12, 2009

solid
green
grass
in the field her dress flows around her
warm
air
light
breeze
shifted sun warms heats her face and arms
shortened
breath
flowery
perfume
a sinking feeling sets in her stomach
ripped
dream
back in
reality
nothing good stays for long

2 comments:

Catie Calamity said...

I like this one! its got a nice structure to it with alot of meaning =)

AlexandraC said...

I agree with Catie.
I like the way this one flows :)